Storyboard drafts

This is my film storyboard draft. It is a six cell template, but there is not much room for description, this factored into my decision to use and eight cell template for my final storyboard. After some feedback I became aware that I didn't detail enough about sound or camera movement, which I amend in my final storyboards. There is also not enough shown of the characters and the emotion they should be showing.
This is my game storyboard draft. I really like how this draft was done. The six cells works perfectly as I can show enough details in drawings while also describing the camera movement, this helps when trying to show realism to the reader and helping them understand the concept. The feedback I got on this draft was positive. As I have both descriptive drawing and writing.





These are the original key props. they give an idea to key plot points in the short film.


This the first drawing of a key location in the film, This helps paint a picture of where the film will take place.










This is the first drawing of the characters. there has been big improvement since this draft to improve emotion.

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